Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

I have recently received the (a) letter from the

school

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about requiring parents to participate in the

school

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trip

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China for three

day

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days

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which will be held next month. Fortunately, I have a holiday and

available

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am available

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to go

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school

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a school

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trip

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. I am

therefore

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writing

this

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letter to apply and would you please consider me to be a part of

this

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tour. I am willing to join

this

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tour,

this

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is because I would like to spend

this

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my leisure time with

son

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my son

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to travel and do many activities

together with

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him. I

have

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apply

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also

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plan to visit my best

friend’s

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friend

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Tommy hometown who is living in Peking, the central city of China.

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my Chinese language skill, I

able

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was able

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to assist

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school

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the school

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by being a guide and translator during the

trip

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, I can find

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apply

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accommodation which is nice,

safety

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safe

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and cheapest. For

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matter, I would like to know some detail about

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tour especially the documents

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apply

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you require

for

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apply and how much money for the

trip

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. I

hope fully

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hopefully

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you will allow me to be a part of

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journey. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Wanvisa Jodnok

kanchanakularathna1991

May 30, 2023

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

200 words

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