The graph gives information about the proportion of females and male in Australia in variation age groups who took daily exercise in 2010.

The graph gives information about the proportion of females and male in Australia in variation age groups who took daily exercise in 2010.
The graph shows the proportion of Australian males and females who took physical activities regularly, and it is divided into six different
age
groups from 15 to over 65 in 2010. In general, the highest percentage of
X
was among 15 to 24-year-olds, and the 45-54
age
group
was the highest for Y.
In addition
, it is noticeable that the rate of Y was higher than
X
in all
age
groups but the youngest. The lowest
category
of Y who did exercise was 47.7%. Their proportion inclined steadily by increasing
age
and reached the top at 45 to 54
age
category
by 53.3%. Above that
group
, it went down to 47.1% in the highest
age
bracket. In the lowest
age
category
,
X
participation was higher than any other
category
, by 52.8%.
This
was
also
the only
group
which has a higher
X
proportion than Y who regularly exercise. Mid-thirty to 44
age
group
showed the lowest, at 39.5%.
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