some people say Histroy is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Recently, there are many arguments about the most superior school topic. Parents often think that, in

this

our

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present era,

science

and

technology

could be more useful than

history

and

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am

in

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the fence about

this

. l agree that

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could help us in the future, but not only for those topics,

history

are

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also

important for our

live

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.

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writing, will discuss both

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of

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with my point of view and give some opinion about

this

matter. On

one

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side, I am sure that

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often

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concern

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about their

children

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children's

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coming times. So eventually, they thought us to prepare since we were at school,

besides

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science

and

technology

are giving the most impact

for

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newcomers to get some jobs.

For example

, some companies will hire you if you have graduated

from

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with

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a technical major, it is a

gurantee

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guarantee

guaranteed

job that could support your

wealthyness

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wealthiness

healthiness

life

for years to come. Meanwhile, on the other side,

history

is as important as

science

and

technology

,

although

it won't give much influence on getting a job,

but

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it gives us more

life

lesson

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that we couldn't have

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before. To demonstrate, If you read a

history

book or an article about the civil war, world war,

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or Indonesia

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Indonesia

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Independence

day

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background, you will learn a lot of stuff from

those story

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that story

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that could

helps

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help

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us in a

real world

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situation by

analizing

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analysing

their tale and learn from their mistakes,

Furthermore

, we won't repeat the same error that they did and take some of their

life

lessons. In conclusion, there are no

such

things as a subject is better than the other,

its

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depends on how we use those

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for our daily

life

.

Science

and

technology

are useful for searching

and

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finding jobs. Apart from that,

history

are

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also

important because it

help

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my

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remind us about the past and everything that our ancestors

leaves

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behind for us.