Recently bought a piece of sports equipment from an online store. When you first used the piece of sports equipment you found a problem with it. Write a letter to the manager of the online store. In your letter Describe the problem with the piece of sports equipment Siri what happened because of the problem Explain what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I, Agna James, a regular patron of your well-known online brand store, writing

this

letter to inform you about the inconvenience caused by a badminton racket, which was purchased on 27th May 2023. I received the product two days later and noticed that there was a crack in it. Since I have a tournament scheduled for next week, it would be impossible to use a defective badminton racket for the game. As I have been trusting the quality of your products for a long time,

this

experience has been really disappointing.

Moreover

, my practice is getting delayed because of

this

issue.

Thus

, it would be commendable to take

this

request into your kind consideration and replace the product with a good one as soon as possible. I am hereby attaching the invoice for the order for

further

review. I look forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully, Agna James

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

151 words

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