The map shows information about the town of Canterbury. Overall, while S1 is located in the countryside, S2 is situated in the downtown.

The map shows information about the town of Canterbury.

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S1 is located in the countryside, S2 is situated in the downtown.The first location

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, which is situated in the rural area,

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of the university and on the outskirts of the housing.

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site is close to the main roads connecting

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is distant from the Town Centre by 5 km.There are 7,000 people who live in

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in the centre of the town. Surrounded by housing on all sides and it would be reachable for everyone.The number of inhabitants in Chartham is slightly lower (4,500) than

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residents.

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The map shows information about the town of Canterbury. Overall, while S1 is located in the countryside, S2 is situated in the downtown.

New technologies and ways of buying and selling a transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

: There is a view that the government should provide houses to those who could not afford them; do you agree or disagree?

ITELS Model Answer: Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?