1. The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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percentage
of adultswith
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adults with
age
groups using the internet
between Correct your spelling
Internet
2003
and 2006 time period in Great Britain.
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the
age
group between 16-24 years. Apart from that, over 65 aged people had the least interest in using internet
showing least number of Correct article usage
the internet
percentage
.
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16-24 age
percentage
of 80% and rose into
the peak of 100% in 2005. But Change preposition
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