You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The line chart given illustrates, how much money is spent in 4 European countries, during the
period
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from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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at the beginning of the time
period
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, Germany and France had higher
sales
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among people with 80 and 52
million
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and,
moreover
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, Italy and Austria had the lowest book
sales
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with approximately 50 and 30
million
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(perspectively). As the graph shows, In Germany the amount of money experienced fluctuation until it reached 100
million
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in 2005.
Although
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between the
period
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from 1999 to 2003, the
sales
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fell slightly, it kept the first position compared to other countries.
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, France's
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at the beginning started with the second position,
then
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rose gradually over time.
By contrast
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, after 2001, Austria witnessed a considerable increase until it became the second book consumer along France with around 71
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sales
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, which seems set to continue.
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, even though Italy had the third position at the beginning it became the
last
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one
at the end
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of the time
period
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with around 61
million
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dollars.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, sales, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • spending patterns
  • steady increase
  • notable growth
  • highest spending
  • moderate increase
  • significant growth
  • comparative analysis
  • cultural investment
  • economic trends
  • over the period
  • consistently higher
  • between X and Y
  • relative starting point
  • year-on-year increase
  • expenditure on books
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