You are a teacher at a secondary school (high school). You have been asked to arrange a visit to a local museum or tourist attraction for some of your students. Write a letter to the manager of the museum or tourist attraction. In your letter you should: say who you are and which school you teach at? say why the school would like the students to visit the museum/attraction? ask about educational facilities or information that the museum/attraction can provide?

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you that we decided to visit the local museum especially the part of Anthropologie on Monday 10 June. I am a tutor of Art in the secondary school of Zamani and I particularly teach anthropology to my su student our school decide to visit some tourist attractions places to improve the knowledge of pupils
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I am responsible to guide students and
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locations for visit. Our school have a serious intention to see the Museum of
Antropologie
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Anthropologie
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viewing that discovering the ancient culture of all country visiting essential part of ancient clothes and the variety of
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musical instruments.
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, I need to know a lot of information about the educational facilities that you will provide for us. Thank you for your help and collaboration yours faithfully,
Abdolrahman
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Abdulrahman
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