While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

People nowadays have more freedom and more options

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to do in life. A high

number

of individuals choose academic studies at universities

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others think that people must be given encouragement to do vocational training

due to

the low

number

of skilled

workers

such

as electricians and plumbers. I completely agree with the latter

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because usually the training cost is not expensive and many businesses

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on these

workers

will possibly close. Individuals who will choose vocational education do not need to spend a large amount of money because it is usually cheaper than studying

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a university. Aside from that, they will earn a living much faster since they can immediately apply the skills they have acquired.

For instance

, TESDA is an agency in the Philippines. It trains and educates people free of charge who want to pursue technical and vocational jobs. These

workers

were able to go abroad and send financial aid to their families.

Furthermore

, vocational

workers

are extremely vital in many businesses today without them,

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will not run and might close eventually.

For instance

, construction companies in Dubai

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employ

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number

of skilled construction

workers

.

Although

, they hire many engineers and other professional jobs the

number

of non-professional

workers

is still higher.

However

, employees from those big companies receive a low salary which is not enough in our time. In conclusion, vocational education must be given attention

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because

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are cheaper than attending university and

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of the

workers

are needed by businesses today.