The graph below shows the average daily spend of three categories of international visitor to New Zealand from 1997 to 2017. Summarise it.

The graph below shows the average daily spend of three categories of international visitor to New Zealand from 1997 to 2017. Summarise it.
The given line graph below illustrates the amount of money spent by three types of visitors in New Zealand between 1997 and 2017. At first glance, it is evident that all of the three
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of
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entering Australia
were considerably fluctuated
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for 20 years. Yet all of them hit a peak in 2000 with the average
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spending for visitors who is in business,
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and visiting friends was around 340$, 270$ and 220$, respectively. As is observed, it is obviously seen that for business
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, the oscillation was dramatically significant. It plummeted to 180$ from 340$ in 2010 until hit a low of 150$ after 2010
then
it rose drastically to 260$. Meanwhile, for
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or vacations, it relatively waved from 2000 to 2010 after that it was inclined slowly.
On the contrary
, people who visited friends or relatives tend to
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over time. In
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, all of the visitors were likely to decrease time by time though it increased again after 2010.
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