The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and report the main features nad make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and report the main features nad make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps reveal the layout of Ryemouth village in 1995 and how it looks now.

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, the villages become more urbanized with recreational facilities

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replacing some natural features. The place where farmland and forest park used to be

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1995 became a golf field with two tennis

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to its south.

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, a new car park was constructed eastward of the hotel at the junction of two main roads

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the cafe southward of it remained unchanged. The fishing port was completely demolished and no more activities can be carried out in the sea now.

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, apartments have been constructed along the

road

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parallel to the sea, replacing the fish market in that area

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the shops along that

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now feature restaurants. To the east of the housing area, a new

road

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was constructed from the west of the north-west

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. New houses are built along that new

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whereas

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the previous housing area remained unchanged.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

159 words

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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and report the main features nad make comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays many people prefer to shop in supermarket rather than small shops or local markets? Is this positive or negative for development? Discuss and give your opinion.

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Some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local person when they visit the cultural and historical attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest?

In many countries, students take a year off finishing school should students take a gap year before attending university? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?