The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and report the main features nad make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps reveal the layout of Ryemouth village in 1995 and how it looks now.

Overall

, the villages become more urbanized with recreational facilities

while

replacing some natural features. The place where farmland and forest park used to be

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1995 became a golf field with two tennis

centers

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to its south.

In addition

, a new car park was constructed eastward of the hotel at the junction of two main roads

while

the cafe southward of it remained unchanged. The fishing port was completely demolished and no more activities can be carried out in the sea now.

Besides

, apartments have been constructed along the

road

parallel to the sea, replacing the fish market in that area

while

the shops along that

road

now feature restaurants. To the east of the housing area, a new

road

was constructed from the west of the north-west

road

. New houses are built along that new

road

whereas

the previous housing area remained unchanged.

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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and report the main features nad make comparisons where relevant.

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