A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Most places globally

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on

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as their main

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of income.

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of difficulties if it is not well-handled. In

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essay, I would be discussing the positive and negative effects of

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in the modern

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. The

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of

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in the modern

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is that it helps to

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and socio-economic exchange.

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access to travel from one country to another in order to exchange goods for money.

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, it gives

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they will be able to learn new things about different cultures.

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, it will provide

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more

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job opportunities to serve as a

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of income and increase their standard of living. It can

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help to strengthen the local economy in order for them to have more

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to be able to trade their goods. There is no doubt that exploring

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to promote the exchange of goods and services

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people

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the modern

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affected some countries.

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, it can lead to

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of unequal infrastructural growth.

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is because they have inadequate facilities to able to help them promote

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,

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to have

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provision of developmental resources in order to explore

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as poor transportation network.

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disruption leads

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economic around the

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and brings

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standard of living for

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. In conclusion, most

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have depended on

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as their

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of income.

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, I strongly believe that the benefits of

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in the modern

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outweigh the drawbacks.