A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Most places globally

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on

tourism

as their main

source

of income.

Although

, it can as well be a

source

of difficulties if it is not well-handled. In

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essay, I would be discussing the positive and negative effects of

tourism

in the modern

world

. The

advantages

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of

tourism

in the modern

world

is that it helps to

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inter-cultural

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and socio-economic exchange.

This

is because

people

will be able to have

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access to travel from one country to another in order to exchange goods for money.

For example

, it gives

people

the barrier to able to explore more around the

world

and in that

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they will be able to learn new things about different cultures.

As a result

, it will provide

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more

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job opportunities to serve as a

source

of income and increase their standard of living. It can

also

help to strengthen the local economy in order for them to have more

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to be able to trade their goods. There is no doubt that exploring

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the

world

has

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to promote the exchange of goods and services

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people

.

However

, the negative effects of exploring

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the modern

world

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affected some countries.

Firstly

, it can lead to

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of unequal infrastructural growth.

In addition

,

this

is because they have inadequate facilities to able to help them promote

tourism

.

For example

,

people

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to have

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the insufficient

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provision of developmental resources in order to explore

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the

world

such

as poor transportation network.

As a result

,

this

disruption leads

insufficient

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economic around the

world

and brings

low

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the low

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standard of living for

people

. In conclusion, most

people

have depended on

tourism

as their

source

of income.

Moreover

, I strongly believe that the benefits of

tourism

in the modern

world

outweigh the drawbacks.