You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates
value
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of money purchased
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books in four different countries from 1995 to 2005. It is measured in $ US dollars.
Overall
, it can be seen that all the four countries increased
at the
end
of the period.
To begin
with, Germany stood at 79 $ US dollars in 1995 and increased steadily to 90 in 1999 which later experienced a decrease in 2003.
Then
, there was a small jump
at the
end
of the year.
Next,
Australia started at 30 in 1995 and remained constant between 1999 and 2001
then
later rose significantly in the remaining following years which ended at 71. France and Italy stood at about 50 and 53 respectively. France grew slightly to 60 in 1999 which rose steadily to 73
at the
end
of the period.
Following
this
, Italy witnessed
a
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growth in 1997 and later dropped markedly to about 50 in 1999.
However
, there was a gradual increase
at the
end
of the year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words end with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • spending patterns
  • steady increase
  • notable growth
  • highest spending
  • moderate increase
  • significant growth
  • comparative analysis
  • cultural investment
  • economic trends
  • over the period
  • consistently higher
  • between X and Y
  • relative starting point
  • year-on-year increase
  • expenditure on books
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