The table below gives information on average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.

The table below gives information on average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.
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The given table illustrates how many
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and minutes people spend on different daily activities by sex in the UK. In brief, the highest and lowest section is the same for both males and females,
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there are two huge differences between them. Moving to the details, average spending time on sleep is in the top place for both at around 8
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, and sports is the least
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of all for both at 0.13 and 0.07 respectively.
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, leisure time took 2nd place of all figures for males and females.
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, a lot of categories except two figures show similar trends between them
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,
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of Housework and employment and study at the men's table provided disparate results from the women. For males, they spend on jobs and housework for
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of 3.45 and 1.41
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respectively,
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females use 2.26
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for work and 3.00
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for housework.
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