The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram shows how many goods
was
transported in Britain from 1974 to 2002.
Change the verb form
were
Overall
,the most popular way of transport was by road while
transportation by pipeline stands last
.In addition
, the figure for water and rail transportation was initially
the same but the former one
showed higher outcomes.
In the beginning,carriage by road was about 70 Correct pronoun usage
apply
million
and then
,there were some fluctuations until 1995, after which it increased dramatically to reach approximately 100 million
.
The transported products by water and rail use the second highest proportion of carriage by
40 Change preposition
apply
million
.However
, while
the former rocketed gradually and significantly as it reached 65 million
in the last
year,the latter experienced fluctuations but remained relatively unchanged.
The carriage by pipeline 0was originally 5 million
and grown
to a little more than 20 Add a missing verb
has grown
million
over the period of almost 3 decades.Submitted by muharodnoy on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
▼