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The process diagram illustrates the phases of the brick manufacturing in the building industry. We can observe that process has 7 stages and each of them is really important .

The process diagram illustrates the phases of the brick manufacturing in the building industry. We can observe that process has 7 stages and each of them is really important .
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The process diagram illustrates the phases of
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brick manufacturing in the building industry. We can observe that process has 7 stages and each of them is really important . First of all the clay was dug out by a wide digger. And
then
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 as a second stage, it was filtered with
metal
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 grid and
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 went to the roller.After combining with water and sand it goes to the next step of manufacturing .
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 the third stage to make the shapes of the brick it might be cut in a white cater or kept in the mould.
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dried in the drying oven for 24 to 48 hours . As the next step dried bricks are
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kept in the kiln for 48 to 72
hour
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 in moderate and high temperatures. After all of
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steps
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 it is being packed as the sixth step .
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 it is being delivered as the
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 stage. We can notice that bricks are getting through a long way
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 manufacturing
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 used in the contraction of
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the building
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building
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buildings
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 we are living in , and we should appreciate it more.
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