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Countries shd spend money on trains rather than new roads. Do you agree or disagree?

#countries #shd #money #trains #roads
Public transports are very important for citizens and nations , some
people
 argue that the government budget should be spent on
trains
 rather than
roads
 , I disagree because in my opinion even though they are useful and may seem convenient they don'
t
 serve all places .
Firstly
 , most
people
 use
roads
 whether
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by their personal vehicles, bus or taxi , some
roads
 are even used by cyclists , their maintenance is vital for user's safety
for instance
 when a lane isn'
t
 well maintained especially if it has holes that can result in dangerous accidents
furthermore
 it can deteriorate
people
's véhicules ,
as a result
 by preserving
roads
 countries preserve their citizen's safety as well .
Secondly
 ,
trains
 don'
t
 serve every place,
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even though
eventhough
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even though
 there are numerous
trains
 around the world , there'll l are many isolated sites that are only reachable by road ,
,
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obviously countries can'
t
 implement railway
roads
 everywhere in the country since it is more expensive and requires more time than building a highway
moreover
 individuals prefer using
roads
 more frequently Than
trains
 because they cannot go into each district and neighbourhood oppositely to other public transport
such
 as buses and taxi
for instance
 when using a road
people
 can choose to take personnel or public transport , depending on their budget since
trains
 are costly , As result
trains
 don'
t
 go everywhere and are more expensive Than other public transport
To conclude
 , in my opinion despite the importance of
trains
 and railways ,
roads
 remain more popular and are way more convenient for individuals
additionally
 they are better able to serve each place in the country
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