The maps below show how a coastal town developed between 1950 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The maps below show how a coastal town developed between 1950 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The illustration presents the growth and progress in
a
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coastal town of Portland from 1950 to 2007.
Overall
, there had been a profound change in almost any part of the city, except for the main dividing it
as well as
the sea which remained the same. In the south, there used to be grasslands from both sides of the way in the early years
however
after more than fifty years, these were replaced with several streets allowing more establishments to be built. Residential areas situated parallel to each other in the southeast are adjacent to a cinema
while
a range of shops can be seen ahead.
Also
, a lot of improvements have taken place in the north. From
industrial
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the industrial
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area,
this
north spot
if
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the town was converted into a multi-storey car park which is connected to a swimming pool and
and
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an enormous park that leads to Yacht Marina.
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