Some People believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion.
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The trend
games
and media
are
dramatically rising. Millions of Correct subject-verb agreement
is
individual
prefer to spend most of their time on graphical Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
games
. A group of traditionalist claims that these activities has
an adverse effect on the community. Change the verb form
have
While
some people
think that these trends are not related to how people
act. In my opinion, these gadgets and social media
plays
an essential role Change the verb form
play
on
brainwashing Change preposition
in
peoples
mindset.
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people's
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with
, every day more than 1 billion Change preposition
apply
people
use social media
and play pc games
, and there are some anti national
groups on social Add a hyphen
anti-national
media
which offers
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offer
small
amount of money to complete a normal task. Individuals who are Add an article
a small
mostly
active have Replace the word
most
high
retention rate, Correct article usage
a high
that
is why they create a task in Correct pronoun usage
which
such
a way which can psychologically effect
them and make them as their Correct your spelling
affect
pupet
to do any wrong thing. Correct your spelling
puppet
Moreover
, there games
like blue Add a missing verb
are games
wale
which Correct your spelling
whale
is
banned by the Government, Correct subject-verb agreement
are
becuase
more than 10 thousand Correct your spelling
because
people
attempt suicide while
playing that game. Thus
, now a days
manipulating someone's mind is Correct the word
nowadays
to
common on these platforms.
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On the other hand
, there are some individuals who are mostly effected
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affected
from
studies, bad financial stability, and Change preposition
by
bulling
. Correct your spelling
bullying
For instance
, a kid that has been bullied can sometimes be cruel to someone else. Another point to consider is the fact that younger seek help but they do not have enough support from the ruling authorities.
In a nutshell, adverse
effect of social Correct article usage
the adverse
media
have
badly affected the mindset of the community, as a matter of Change the verb form
has
fact
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,fact
people
are commiting
big crimes, which is too tough to control, and psychologically Correct your spelling
committing
effecting
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affecting
games
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