Some People believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion.
The trend of graphics
games
and Use synonyms
media
is dramatically rising. Millions of individuals prefer to spend most of their time on graphical Use synonyms
games
. A group of traditionalists claims that these activities have an adverse effect on the community. Use synonyms
While
some communities think that these trends are not related to how Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
reacts
. In my opinion, these gadgets and social Change the verb form
react
media
play an essential role Use synonyms
on
brainwashing Change preposition
in
people
's mindsets.
Every day more than 1 billion Use synonyms
people
use social Use synonyms
media
and play pc Use synonyms
games
, and there are some anti-national groups on social Use synonyms
media
which Use synonyms
offers
Change the verb form
offer
small
amount of money to complete a normal task. Individuals who are most active have a high retention rate, which is why they create a task in Add an article
a small
such
a way which can psychologically affect them and make them Linking Words
as
their puppets to do any wrong thing. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, there are Linking Words
games
like blue whale which are banned by the Government, because more than 10 thousand Use synonyms
people
attempt suicide Use synonyms
while
playing that game. Linking Words
Thus
, nowadays manipulating someone's mind is too common on these platforms.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, there are some individuals who are most affected by studies, bad financial stability, and bullying. Linking Words
For instance
, a kid that has been bullied can sometimes be cruel to someone else. Another point to consider is the fact that younger seek help but they do not have enough support from the ruling authorities.
In a nutshell, the adverse effect of social Linking Words
media
has badly affected the mindset of the community, as a matter of Use synonyms
fact
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,fact
people
are committing big crimes, which Use synonyms
is
too tough to control, and psychologically affecting Correct subject-verb agreement
are
games
should be banned by the Government.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite