The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The graph illustrates information about two different countries for a certain period of time
of
both renting and buying houses. Change preposition
for
Overall
, from 1918 to 2001, owned accommodations increased through the period, while
rented ones decreased during these decades.
It can clearly be seen that, until the year of
1971, Change preposition
apply
where
both reached the same figures of 50 Correct word choice
when
percent
, house rentals were the most popular trend, starting the period with nearly 80 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Meanwhile, from 1918 to 1971, house owning started to gain popularity and Change the spelling
per cent
begun
to gradually rise from approximately 22 to 50 Wrong verb form
began
percent
as Change the spelling
per cent
it
was referred Correct pronoun usage
apply
earlier
.
It is noticeable that from 1981 forward there was a change in the percentages until 2001 Change preposition
to earlier
whereas
owned homes went up to numbers around 70 Correct word choice
when
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
in contrast
to home rentals that went down to 30 percent
. In the Change the spelling
per cent
last
decade, another fact worth noticing is the reverse tendency of both households where it is clear that
rentals had climbed while
the other category started to decline.Submitted by acarina.simoes on
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