The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in
grams
per week
), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
The illustration presents the expenditures in fast food snacks in grams
per person per week
in the UK for 20 years.
From an overall
perspective, it is clear to see that people chose to buy fish and chips over a period of two decades.
Between 1970 and 1980, fish and chips and hamburgers had an increase in sales however
pizza
was on a decreasing trend. The former went up from approximately 90 grams
/week
and rocketed to around 150 and the latter from roughly 20 grams
/ week
rose to around 90. In contrast
, pizza
had a significant decline from 300 grams
/week
to an estimation of around 210 grams
/week
.
After ten years, the two trending snacks have been bought increasingly for more than three times their values in 1980; 500 grams
/week
and approximately 290g/wk, respectively. On the other hand
, pizza
constantly remained at 210g/wk in 1990.
In conclusion, although
there was a big rise in the consumption of pizza
and hamburgers, sales of fish and chips decreased.Submitted by michelleagustinbalagot11 on
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