The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the number of males and females doing full-time or part-time study in Britain in three different subsequent decades, which are 1970/71, 1980/81 and 1990/91.
Overall
, the full-time has way higher students than the part-time students.
Also
, over the years, part-time students have increased in numbers. Looking at the men's data,
although
we notice full-time education had the highest numbers during the starting period with around 1000 men, it fell between 800 and 1000 in the following decades.
However
, part-time has shown an increasing trend with around 100 men at the start, but
then
it rose to about 200 by 1990/91. Meanwhile, the women's graph has an inclination toward both types of studies. In the year 1970/71 full-time had around 700 women which rose to above 1000 in 1990/91.
Similarly
, part-time started at below 100 and
then
rose to 200 following decades, where it remained stable until the next decade.
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