The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the number of males and females doing full-time or part-time study in Britain in three different subsequent decades, which are 1970/71, 1980/81 and 1990/91.
Overall
, the full-time has way higher students than the part-time students. Linking Words
Also
, over the years, part-time students have increased in numbers.
Looking at the men's data, Linking Words
although
we notice full-time education had the highest numbers during the starting period with around 1000 men, it fell between 800 and 1000 in the following decades. Linking Words
However
, part-time has shown an increasing trend with around 100 men at the start, but Linking Words
then
it rose to about 200 by 1990/91.
Meanwhile, the women's graph has an inclination toward both types of studies. In the year 1970/71 full-time had around 700 women which rose to above 1000 in 1990/91. Linking Words
Similarly
, part-time started at below 100 and Linking Words
then
rose to 200 following decades, where it remained stable until the next decade.Linking Words
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