The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that the prevailing growth of online marketplaces will end up shutting

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conventional brick-and-mortar shops in the cities. I completely agree with

this

statement as I witness day-to-day changes in

the

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shopping trends.

This

type of distant purchasing not only provides convenience to the people but

also

help

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them to save

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valuable

time

.

This

essay will discuss why internet shopping has more edge

than

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over

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the traditional way of buying materials.

Firstly

, in

this

modern era of technology, most

of

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individuals

spend enough

time

online, and

hence

it is very convenient for them to order day-to-day materials through online sites.

In other words

,

individuals

prefer to go to the internet sites of the supermarket and

likes

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to choose the products from its online showcases which enables them to make

best

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choice rather than spending their energy

for

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on

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visiting the shopping

centers

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.

For example

, the big tech company, Amazon can manifest a wide variety of electronic gadgets available in China in their digital marketplace , and

individuals

sitting in Brazil can find

it

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them

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and order them through its site. In the absence of online facility, one must visit China to explore the products which

is

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very expensive and not affordable

by

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everybody.

Hence

digital shopping has more privileges over the prevailing way of purchasing things since

individuals

can make

best

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options by merely sitting at their

home

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.

Secondly

,

this

fast moving

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world values

time

more than anything and people do not have enough

time

to spend

for

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shopping because they spend

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part of the day in their offices.

Subsequently

, they do not have much energy to go to

supermarket

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the supermarket

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to buy things. The availability

online

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of online

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delivery apps,

such

as

,

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Uber enables them to order their favourite items with a few clicks without wasting much

time

. In

short

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the

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people try to buy from internet

market places

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marketplaces

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not because they actually do not want to visit the place but because to save their valuable

time

which

otherwise

can be converted

in to

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money.

To conclude

, e-commerce and related digital shopping are gaining more traction among the public

due to

the convenience

as well as

time saving

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time-saving

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they provide. If

this

trend continues, in the near future, we will witness the demise of physical stores.