The graphs below illustrate the gadgets individuals in the 18 to 25 age categories utilized to watch TV channels in Canada in 2009 and 2019.

The graphs below illustrate the gadgets individuals in the 18 to 25 age categories utilized to watch TV channels in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
The given pie chart demonstrates the six technological devices
that
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used
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for
watcing
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watching
TV
programs in the population of 18 to 25 years old in Canada from 2009 to 2019.
Overall
, conventional
TV
was the most dominant device in 2009, but it lost its popularity over time.
However
; mobile phones and flat-screen TVs became the most significant alternatives after a decade. The three biggest
TV
channels
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providers were conventional TVs, desktop computers,and laptops, with 34%, 18%, and 20%; respectively. The common feature of these machines was their popularity declined
in
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the period of ten years. Conventional TVs saw the biggest drop with
decrease
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of 30%, and replaced the
last
rank in 2019. These
devices
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total attribution was decreased to around
a
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one-third of the total. The three remaining smart devices inclined their
TV
channels
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watching ratio from 2009 to 2019.
Smart phone
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(15%), and
flat screen
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flat-screen
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(8%) users for watching
TV
programs increased to 27%, and 26%, by order in 2019.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tv with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrate
  • gadgets
  • utilized
  • age categories
  • watching TV channels
  • comparison
  • popularity
  • notable trends
  • increase/decrease
  • devices
  • decade
  • advancements in technology
  • user preferences
  • speculation
  • future trends
  • conclusion
  • implications
  • technology and media companies
  • lifestyle
  • habits
  • target age group
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