Traffic and Housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, megacities all over the world have been dealing with urbanization and its problems greatly
due to
overpopulation. Some Linking Words
people
believe that relocating companies, factories and their staff to the countryside can be the remedy to traffic and accommodations Use synonyms
dilemma
in Fix the agreement mistake
dilemmas
big
Add an article
a big
the big
metropolis
. I strongly disagree with Use synonyms
this
idea and in Linking Words
this
,essay I will support my opinion with examples.
On the one hand, some Linking Words
people
think that it would relieve significant strain on housing if a large amount of the workforce moved to a more rural area to settle down. It is known that some Use synonyms
people
often mobilise to bigger Use synonyms
metropolis
seeking out better employment and educational opportunities and it is more convenient for them to live somewhere nearby their workplace in order to save time commuting, which eventually leads to high demand for accommodations around business-filled locations. Use synonyms
As a result
, by moving businesses with a high number of employees to the countryside, there would be less stress put on housing demand in Linking Words
such
areas. Linking Words
Moreover
, the fewer community commuting daily, the lighter the transport becomes. Linking Words
For instance
, many textile factories are situated in more deserted fields and workers are provided with accommodations nearby.
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On the other hand
, I strongly believe that leaving the countryside to live in the Linking Words
metropolis
is a natural process and relocating companies and factories to rural areas will not make everyone change their mind. Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
people
who already live in urban centres are used to the convenience of advanced infrastructure Use synonyms
as well as
the high standard of living there. Linking Words
For example
, food ordering services are extremely popular and easy to access in the major centre, Linking Words
however
, in rural regions, everyone tends to cook at home or travel a long distance to have a meal. Linking Words
Secondly
, being able to own a place in Linking Words
big
Correct article usage
a big
metropolis
is still considered to be the top priority for most of the working class as they think of it as an investment for the future, not just a place to live in. In most developing countries, the nearer a place to the centre, the better price it is on the real estate market. Use synonyms
Therefore
, house owners in the Linking Words
center
tend to keep their houses and commute long distances to work Change the spelling
centre
instead
of selling them to live near their workplace. Linking Words
Last
but not least, society who did not have a vehicle before will have to buy a new one to travel to work, which avoidably adds to the traffic that has been overloaded with cars and motorbikes.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
there is no doubt there is a chance that putting businesses outside urban centres can help ease the pressing strain on housing and transportation difficulty in Linking Words
Use synonyms
metropolis
, I believe Add an article
the metropolis
a metropolis
community
will choose to live in the city centres and buy new cars to travel to work, which may cause greater problems and create more issues in the future.Add an article
the community
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