When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A large number of people consider that

money

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is

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thing for choosing a

job

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. From my point of view, I totally disagree with

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statement and in

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essay

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I will explain

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further

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with two reasons.

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with,

amount

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of payment from

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a job

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is definitely considered essential for

jobseekers

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. To put it another way, we all have basic needs,

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as housing, food, bill, education and health which are connected deeply with

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.

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, satisfaction and environment which is

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and workmate from work

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much more important compared to

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income. Since working will continue

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long

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time,

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this

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reason

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money

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can't cover all disadvantages

from

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laboring

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which is hard to endure. Burnout syndrome,

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, is

biggest

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drawback

for

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miserable

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working environment. Almost 15

percent

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of humankind, who are working, are facing

with

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the symptom

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symptom

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of burnout syndrome, namely

drained

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all of the time, feeling insufficient and

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detached from

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. Another reason

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opposing the idea that

money

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is

first

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consideration

,

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is personal development. To be more precise, if mankind

choose

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because of

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satisfaction, in the future, skill and knowledge will undoubtedly improve

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field.

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, great capability from

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the profession

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will come

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considerable

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amount of income,

for

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reason, there is no need to choose work with high-income in the first. To illustrate

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idea,

J.K.Rowling

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of "Harry Potter" can work as a reduction in some

newspaper

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, in spite of

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, she

had

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chose

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being

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an author,

eventually

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it gave her huge

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and

money

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. In conclusion,

money

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is

important

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consideration to choose

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a job

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,

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, there are

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strong factors compared to

wage

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. Working with

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leader and friendly

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furthermore

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, pleasure from

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the job

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will enhance knowledge and practice,

eventually

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,eventually

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we can earn enough.