Environmental damage is the problem of most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility

It is true that some countries have to face the
damage
of
environment
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the environment
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.
This
can be attributed to several reasons, which
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responsibilitied
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responsible
by people. On the one hand, there are many reasons why the
environment
is
damage
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. One obvious reason is
that
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deforestation. To be more precise, people cut down trees for their purchase purpose, so that more and more plants in the forest are chopped.
This
means the ecosystem is destroyed and
lead
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to the fact that the
environment
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to face consequences
such
as a big storm or a drought. Another culprit worth mentioning is
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a habit of
human
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humans
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.
This
arises from the fact that there are some plastic materials that a company uses for their products, and citizens have a habit of using plastic bags when they shop.
For example
, in Vietnam, various plastic bags are found in the outside market, and it is used almost
everyday
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.
This
leads to
fact
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the fact
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that more and more unfriendly
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trash
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which
cause
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causes
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badly
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environment
are
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thrown
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everyday
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.
On the other hand
, the responsibility should be taken by residents and the
goverment
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government
.
Firstly
, the government should impose a ban on every
companies
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company
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and
indiduals
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individual
who
affect
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affects
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the
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nature
, and they should be punished strictly.
Besides
, the government should encourage the population to protect the
environment
and have suitable policies that
allows
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to improve
the
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nature
and
minimal
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minimise
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the
damage
.
For instance
, the government can release a campaign to adverse how the
damage
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environment
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the environment
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is effect significantly on
people
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life
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lives
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.
Secondly
, every
individuals
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should have the responsibility
on protecting
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to protect
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the
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nature
and
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a solution to assist
it
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grow
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up
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.
Additionaly
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Additionally
, organizations can have
a
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plans which give a hand to protect the
invironment
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environment
such
as changing
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of products or using friendly materials to produce goods.
Thus
,
the
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nature
can be more green
,
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and
also
decline
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the
damage
. In conclusion, there are several reasons to explain why the
environment
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is damage
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damage
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in
somecountries
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some countries
. I hold
belief
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the belief
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that every
individuals
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individual
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should give
an
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assistance to make the
environment
become
more clean
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cleaner
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, and have
a
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fresh air to live
.
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