Environmental damage is the problem of most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility
It is true that some countries have to face the
damage
of environment
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the environment
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can be attributed to several reasons, which is
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responsible
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damaged
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deforestation. To be more precise, people cut down trees for their purchase purpose, so that more and more plants in the forest are chopped. Correct determiner usage
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means the ecosystem is destroyed and lead
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leads
environment
have
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has
such
as a big storm or a drought. Another culprit worth mentioning is that
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human
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humans
This
arises from the fact that there are some plastic materials that a company uses for their products, and citizens have a habit of using plastic bags when they shop. For example
, in Vietnam, various plastic bags are found in the outside market, and it is used almost everyday
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leads to fact
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the fact
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On the other hand
, the responsibility should be taken by residents and the goverment
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government
Firstly
, the government should impose a ban on every companies
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company
indiduals
who Correct your spelling
individual
affect
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affects
the
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nature
, and they should be punished strictly. Besides
, the government should encourage the population to protect the environment
and have suitable policies that allows
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allow
the
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nature
and minimal
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minimise
damage
. For instance
, the government can release a campaign to adverse how the damage
of
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to
environment
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the environment
people
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people's
life
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lives
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, every individuals
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individual
on protecting
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to protect
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nature
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grow
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growth
up
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Additionaly
, organizations can have Correct your spelling
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a
plans which give a hand to protect the Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
invironment
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environment
such
as changing package
of products or using friendly materials to produce goods. Correct article usage
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, the
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nature
can be more green,
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also
decline
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reduce
damage
.
In conclusion, there are several reasons to explain why the environment
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some countries
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