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The graph shows the changes in the percentage of people who go to the movies once a month by age group in a European country from 2000 to 2011.

The graph shows the changes in the percentage of people who go to the movies once a month by age group in a European country from 2000 to 2011.
The graph shows the changes in the percentage of
people
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 who go to the movies once a
month
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 by age group in a European country from 2000 to 2011.
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, we can see the highest proportion of
people
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 aged 15-24 who go to the cinema once a
month
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 and those aged 35 and over the lowest.
In addition
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, the figures for all age groups increased over the given time period. In 2000, the 15 to
24 year old
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24-year-old
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 age group who went to the cinema once a
month
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 accounted for 15%.
This
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 number tripled over the next five and a half years and continued to grow until 2011 to more than 50%. Meanwhile, only about 3% of
people
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 aged 35 and over go to the cinema at least once a
month
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.
This
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 number
also
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 increased gradually over the years and reached approximately 13% in 2011. Very similar trends can be seen for
people
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 between the ages of 7-14 and 25-35. Starting at around 10% and 5% respectively, both numbers continued to grow over the measurement period to
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reach 30% in 2011.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, month with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • graph
  • year
  • country
  • age
  • group
  • monthly
  • movie
  • watch
  • go
  • rise
  • increase
  • fall
  • decrease
  • growth
  • decline
  • trend
  • pattern
  • overall
  • by
  • from
  • to
  • than
  • other
  • similar
  • different
  • small
  • big
  • significant
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • peak
  • valley
  • data
  • number
  • people
  • audience
  • viewers
  • cinema
  • film
  • price
  • cost
  • time
  • leisure
  • reason
  • cause
  • result
  • compare
  • in contrast
  • although
  • however
  • therefore
  • first
  • then
  • finally
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