The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Women have grown bigger in recent years, independently, with

choice

and speech. Their voices or words are now recognised and respected. Unlike those days way by they were not noticed or anything and it felt like they were slaves at those moments. In the past 50th decades women were not working or doing anything academics. The only roles they had were to look after the households by cleaning, cooking and looking after the children. They didn't have a

choice

of anything other than that. They used to be taken as objects not as humans by the male society who dominated them.

For

instance

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families introduce

females

in early marriage which was wrong that stopped them from growing and achieving

thier

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their

goals.

Moreover

,

this

was done in exchange

of

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cows, food and money.

This

led to low self-esteem in that

genger

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ginger

gender

. Meanwhile, men had all advantages of

choice

, speech, freedom, leadership and many more. Nowadays women have high profiles which only men had before. They have grown academically doing jobs which only men did. They now do more than before they work, look after households, have children

while

working, freedom of

choice

compared to the

last

centuries.

Females

were reserved they could not express their views or feelings.

Furthermore

, they are leaders of profitable companies expressing their knowledge and strengths. In my conclusion gender achievement of equality has been developed.

Females

are able to provide advice and support. They are respected by the community

due to

this

achievement. They

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equal

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supportive structure for both

females

and males.