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In some cities, traffic jam has become a major problem. Some people claim that government should impose a congestion tax during the rush hour. To extent do you agree or disagree.

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It is true that
traffic
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congestion
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 has gradually become a primary issue these days. Some
people
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 believe that the
government
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 should carry out a
traffic
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 tax during peak hours,
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 I partly agree that there are some arguments about
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 implementation. On the one hand, it is undeniable that the
government
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 implementing road pricing will certainly be able to reduce the number of cars during rush hour.
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, charging higher fees during busy
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 periods may discourage
people
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 from driving their private cars.
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 can result in shorter travel times and smoother
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 flow.
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,
congestion
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 pricing could stimulate
people
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 to take public transportation which could reduce air pollution.
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,
people
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 would be willing to take the bus in order to reduce their expenditures.
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, the measure of charging
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 taxes by the
government
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 not only reduces the volume of vehicles but
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 lessens the emission of carbon dioxide.
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, some
people
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 argue that
congestion
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 taxes could create an additional financial burden for those who live in rural areas and need to rely on private vehicles.
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, if the
government
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 regulates
this
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 measure could affect local businesses.
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, reducing
traffic
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congestion
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 during rush hour may discourage
people
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 from visiting shops, restaurants, and department stores, which will decrease their revenue. It has a negative impact on both local businesses and
people
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 who drive the car to work every day. In conclusion,
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 the
government
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 could put
congestion
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 taxes into practice and could alleviate the
traffic
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 problem, I believe that carrying out
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 implementation would cause some issues for the public.
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