The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each catrgory of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and maje comparisons where relevant.

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shows the export system in five different product categories of a country and it

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points out the changes in the number of billion dollars in the

year

2016 and 2015. One of the most striking

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shown in the graph is the stagnant

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the amount of transport among all the five various industrial categories. It can be seen that

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in export is continuous from the

year

2015 to 2016. The chart shows that

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Petroleum products

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the highest amount of export

earnings

in the

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2016 which is about 65 billion dollars.

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the Textile industry has the least amount of transport

earnings

in 2016

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cost of 32 billion dollars. Engineered goods and Agricultural products had a slight increase in

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earnings

in 2016 compared to the

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2015, almost around 60 and 30

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respectively. Gems and Jewellery

however

has a minor decline in the shipment

earnings

in 2016 compared to that in 2015.

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