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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each catrgory of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and maje comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each catrgory of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and maje comparisons where relevant.
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 shows the export system in five different product categories of a country and it
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 points out the changes in the number of billion dollars in the
year
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 2016 and 2015. One of the most striking
feature
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 shown in the graph is the stagnant
declination
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of
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 the amount of transport among all the five various industrial categories. It can be seen that
decrease
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 in export is continuous from the
year
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 2015 to 2016. The chart shows that
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Petroleum products
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 the highest amount of export
earnings
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 in the
year
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 2016 which is about 65 billion dollars.
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 the Textile industry has the least amount of transport
earnings
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 in 2016
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the
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 cost of 32 billion dollars. Engineered goods and Agricultural products had a slight increase in
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earnings
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 in 2016 compared to the
year
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2015, almost around 60 and 30
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 respectively. Gems and Jewellery
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 has a minor decline in the shipment
earnings
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 in 2016 compared to that in 2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, earnings with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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