You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visit you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say – What the problem was and when it happened – What the swimming pool staff have done about it – Suggest your own solution to the problem.

Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Anand, I am living in the euro village villa compound for the
last
2 months. I was using a swimming pool once in a blue moon. There I noticed, the dress changing room is not clean, and it was always in wet condition,
also
slippery. I faced
this
problem during my
last
2 visits. Almost, I fell down,
due to
the wet
floor
,but I controlled myself,
otherwise
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it will be a costly mistake. Immediately, reported to the swimming coach, Mr James. He arranged cleaner to clean the
floor
. Somehow, it was better.
However
, after some time many people came from the pool and make the
floor
wet and dirty again. My suggestion for
this
problem, arrange
floor
carpets at the entrance of the dress changing room. With the help of
floor
carpet, the
floor
will be dry and users not fell down. And feel comfortable coming again and maintaining good harmony. Yours faithfully, Anand
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