The three pie charts illustrate the amount of hours spent by undergraduates and postgraduates in comparison with a total student population in the British University library.
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The three pie charts illustrate the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
hours
spent by undergraduates and postgraduates in comparison with a
total student population in the British University Correct article usage
the
library
.
For instance
, a large proportion of undergraduate students
spend between one and seven hours
in library
in comparison with postgraduate Add an article
the library
students
. The figures were 63 percent
and seventeen per cent respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
Furthermore
, only nine per cents of undergraduate students
spent at least 16 hours
in the library
, whereas
the postgraduate students
average in Change noun form
students'
student's
this
category is 51 per cent , which is just over a half.
Meanwhile, for total
student population, the pattern appears to be slightly different. Exactly half of them spend 8 or more Add an article
the total
a total
hours
in library
. But out of the total fifteen per cent read sixteen or more. Which is almost a third of the corresponding figure for postgraduate Add an article
the library
students
.
It is clear that
postgraduate students
spend more time in the British University library
than either undergraduates or other students
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