The three pie charts illustrate the amount of hours spent by undergraduates and postgraduates in comparison with a total student population in the British University library.

The three pie charts illustrate the

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of

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spent by undergraduates and postgraduates in comparison with

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total student population in the British University

library

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, a large proportion of undergraduate

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spend between one and seven

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in comparison with postgraduate

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. The figures were 63

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and seventeen per cent respectively.

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, only nine per cents of undergraduate

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spent at least 16

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in the

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the postgraduate

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students

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category is 51 per cent , which is just over a half. Meanwhile, for

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student population, the pattern appears to be slightly different. Exactly half of them spend 8 or more

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. But out of the total fifteen per cent read sixteen or more. Which is almost a third of the corresponding figure for postgraduate

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postgraduate

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spend more time in the British University

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than either undergraduates or other

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