The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given chart compares the habit of doing regular
exercise
between men
and women
in various age groups. Overall
, women
tended to do more regular physical activity than men
.
Men
between 15 to 24 years old showed the strongest willing
to Replace the word
willingness
exercise
regularly, which accounted for slightly more than half. The group
over 65 was in the
second place, with just under 50 per Correct article usage
apply
cent
. Group
55 to 64 came third,
which was made up 45 per cent
. The following were group
45 to 54 and 25 to 34, which Fix the agreement mistake
groups
contitued
slightly above 40 per Correct your spelling
continued
constituted
cent
. The men
from 35 to 40 were least willing doing
regular physical Change the verb form
to do
exercise
, with only less than 40 per cent
.
On the other hand
, there were
the least percentage of Change the verb form
was
women
over 65 years old Correct pronoun usage
who exercise
exercise
regularly, with slightly above three Wrong verb form
exercised
quarter
, which was almost Fix the agreement mistake
quarters
same
Correct article usage
the same
with
Change preposition
for
men
. Women
from 15 to 24 was
made up less than Unnecessary verb
apply
a
half, which was fewer than Correct article usage
apply
men
. In the remaining group
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,group
women
did more regular physical activities than men
, and among them, group
45 to 54 showed the strongest Fix the agreement mistake
groups
willing
, with 53.3 per Replace the word
willingness
cent
. The folloing
were Correct your spelling
following
group
55 to 64, 35 to 44 and 25 to 34, which Fix the agreement mistake
groups
costitued
53%, 52.5%, Correct your spelling
constituted
just
under 50%, respectively.Correct word choice
and just
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exercise, men, women, group, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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