The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given chart compares the habit of doing regular
exercise
between
men
and
women
in various age groups.
Overall
,
women
tended to do more regular physical activity than
men
.
Men
between 15 to 24 years old showed the strongest
willing
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willingness
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to
exercise
regularly, which accounted for slightly more than half. The
group
over 65 was in
the
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apply
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second place, with just under 50 per
cent
.
Group
55 to 64 came
third,
which was made up 45 per
cent
. The following were
group
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groups
show examples
45 to 54 and 25 to 34, which
contitued
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continued
constituted
slightly above 40 per
cent
. The
men
from 35 to 40 were least willing
doing
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to do
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regular physical
exercise
, with only less than 40 per
cent
.
On the other hand
, there
were
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was
show examples
the least percentage of
women
over 65 years old
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who exercise
show examples
exercise
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exercised
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regularly, with slightly above three
quarter
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quarters
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, which was almost
same
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the same
show examples
with
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for
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men
.
Women
from 15 to 24
was
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apply
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made up less than
a
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apply
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half, which was fewer than
men
. In the remaining
group
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,group
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women
did more regular physical activities than
men
, and among them,
group
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groups
show examples
45 to 54 showed the strongest
willing
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willingness
show examples
, with 53.3 per
cent
. The
folloing
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following
were
group
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groups
show examples
55 to 64, 35 to 44 and 25 to 34, which
costitued
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constituted
53%, 52.5%,
just
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and just
show examples
under 50%, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exercise, men, women, group, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Australian men
  • Australian women
  • Age groups
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participated
  • Increased
  • Decreased
  • Proportion
  • Physically active
  • Gender difference
  • Engaged
  • Exercise
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