The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories. The table shows the percentage change in each category or exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The given chart highlights information about the amount of wealth which was earned by one territory in a diversity of fields and the table
also
illustrates data about the portions of altered value regarding each exports
in 2016 compared with 2015.
Change to a singular noun
export
Overall
, it can be seen that the
petroleum products Correct article usage
apply
was
the head item on the list in both mentioned years which bring big money Correct subject-verb agreement
were
while
the
textiles Correct article usage
apply
was
the Change the verb form
were
last
port at which point it made a small array of cash.
Looking at the details, around 60$ billion
were earned by the
petroleum products in 2015 and Correct article usage
apply
it
saw a 3% increase in 2016 and reached 63$ Correct pronoun usage
which
billion
in the first year and
it improved Correct word choice
apply
approximately
eight Change preposition
by approximately
percentages
in 2016. Replace the word
per cent
Additionally
, the Gems and jewellery category was ranked third with over forty billion
dollars in 2015 but unfortunately
it dropped to 40 in the following year and became the only port with 5.18% degradation.
The next one was the Add a comma
,unfortunately
agrucultural
products with a similar amount, 31 in 2015 and 32 in 2016 ;Correct your spelling
agricultural
therefore
, it enhanced only 0,81%. Finally
, the textilles
was the Correct your spelling
textiles
last
one with 25 billion
dollars in 2015 but interestingly it became the only item with a high growth with
15,24% during a period and reached over 31 in 2016.Change preposition
of
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