The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (C02) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (C02) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates how much every individual averagely emits carbon dioxide in four European countries which are the United Kindom,
Sweden
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, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
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, the personal percentage of CO2 emissions in the UK and
Sweden
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decreased over the given period,
while
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the figure increased in another two countries. The average number of British CO2 emissions was the highest between 1967 and 2007(approximately 12 per
cent
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in 1967 to 9 per
cent
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in 2007).
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the trend of per person CO2 emission in
Sweden
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increased significantly from 8.3% in 1967 to 10.1% in 1977,
this
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figure dropped to about 6 next thirty years. Italian's individual CO2
emission
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emissions
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rose from about 4 per
cent
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to 8 per
cent
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over forty years and the number was the same as
Sweden
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's in 1995. Portuguese were the lowest emissions
comparing
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the other countries from 1.8 per
cent
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in 1967 to 6 per
cent
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in 2007.
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