The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The given data illustrates the
amount
spent on Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
and
bananas
in the years 1999 and 2004 in five different nations in Europe. A quick glance at these tables reveals that there was a rise in the
sales
volume of
coffee
in each country,
whereas
there were only three out of five countries that saw an increase in the
sales
amount
of
bananas
.
Overall
, the UK had the highest spending
amount
on both two products. Looking at the details about
sales
of
coffee
, Switzerland's figure was highest in 1999, at 3
million
Euros,
then
doubled in 2004.
However
, from 1.5
million
in 1999,
sales
in the UK saw a skyrocket in 2004, to 20
million
,
thus
, ranking first in terms of
coffee
sales
. In terms of the figure for banana
sales
, the UK managed to maintain its position as the country with the highest spending
amount
on
bananas
, at 15
million
in 1999 and 47
million
in 2004.
While
Switzerland and Denmark both had a fair increase, from 1
million
to 5.5
million
, and from 0.6
million
to 4
million
respectively, there was a slight decline in the
sales
performance of
bananas
in Belgium and Sweden.
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  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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