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The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Both the graph and the chart illustrate the rate of illegal activities in the UK for the past year. Units are measured in the number of crimes in the line graph and percentages in the pie chart.
Overall
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, it can be seen that most of the breaches were done by people between 12 and 24.
Also
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, the biggest part of them was related to violence and property. The first few years of one's life were not connected with committing crimes. After that, at the ages between 12 and ,16 there was a sharp increase in that number (70), reaching a peak at the age of 20 (80). The line decreased at 28 and after that remained approximately the same until 60. 46% of all cases were linked with outrage and 23% were about estates. Just slightly above 20% of the crimes were caused by illegal substances and only 9% of them were linked to social disorder .

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph depicts
  • The pie chart illustrates
  • reveals
  • displays
  • depicts
  • the trend of
  • the overall crime rate
  • steadily decreased
  • the distribution of
  • different types of crime
  • prevalent
  • accounts for
  • the most common crime
  • followed by
  • make up
  • a smaller proportion of
  • the total crimes
  • a smaller percentage
  • approximately
  • the remaining percentage
  • It is important to note that
  • reflects
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