The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart and the line graph illustrate the medium degrees for every month and how much swimwear was sold in New York for the first half of the year 2012. Units are measured in revenue: hundred thousand for the clothes sales and average temperature (Fahrenheit) for the chart. The line reveals that there was a rise in the trade of swimming suits in the first four months, reaching a peak in April with approximately 300$ spent.
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there was a rapid decrease ( between 50$ and 100$ in May) and the lowest point was in June when data showed results between 0$ and 50$.
On the other hand
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, it is seen that temperatures got higher and the weather got hotter with time. In the first ,trimester the degrees were somewhere between 30 and 40 with the lowest temperatures in February (30). The second trimester illustrated a rise in
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sector, reaching a level of almost 70 in June. In April the temperature was around 60 Fahrenheit, but that didn't stop the shoppers to reach the highest amount of money for their purchases.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly temperatures
  • bathing suit sales
  • correlation
  • monthly breakdown
  • significant changes
  • warmest months
  • speculate
  • trends
  • increase in temperature
  • contrasting
  • predictive speculation
  • general trends
  • specific months
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