The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates how much
people
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get paid for their jobs in different cities in the United Kingdom. Units are measured in
pound
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sterling.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there is a big difference between the medium pay in the cities and the higher amount of money, given to someone, is in the two places with the most and least tested
people
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. London, England is in a head position with 33,634-
pound
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pound
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sterling (50951
people
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are tested). Next on the line is Cambridge, England with just 2180
people
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asked and 29,854
pound
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sterling. The third position is for an English city called Bristol with 3111 sampled persons and Edinburgh, Scotland with 2553 tested (27,827 and 27,592-
pound
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pound
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sterling respectively).
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there were a lot of employees, reached with the question about their salaries, both Birmingham and Manchester (both in England) showed low money income (25,531 and 25, 909 respectively). Glasgow, Scotland is somewhere in the middle with 26,150 and 3113
people
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. So, in ,comparison there is no connection between how many employees were given the question to answer and how much money they make in different cities.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, pound with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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