The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate how Westley
town
changed over the years from 1815 until these days.
Overall
, it can be seen that there is a significant difference between those two plans. The infrastructure of the road system had changed, the green parts of the
town
were reduced, regarding
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construction of new estates and there was the expansion of the living
area
and adding new business
area
. The
town
bridge was destructed and at present a new railway, that runs through the whole
area
, is seen in its place. The new railway station and the new cinema stand where once were the fields of the
town
. The only things that remain the same today are the Market Square and
Town
Hall in the east of the cinema, and the Lenton Lake which is situated in the south of Tinton village. Just across the lake, on the other side of the road there used to be Lord Westley's house and nowadays there are Lenton Hotel and The Red Lion. The forests of Westley west form the lake were replaced with brand new housing estates and south of them there is now a shopping centre
instead
of a church. Business
area
erected in the south part of the
town
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential area
  • amenities
  • thoroughfare
  • connectivity
  • industrial development
  • factory
  • public amenities
  • recreational facilities
  • educational facilities
  • residential expansion
  • apartment blocks
  • commercial activity
  • shopping centers
  • restaurants
  • single-family homes
  • development
  • open field
  • noticeable change
  • replacing
  • establishment
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