The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of regular physical activity in both genders in the year 2010.

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males

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experienced a downward trend,

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females

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showed an upward trend

troughout

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throughout

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. Both

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rates had some fluctuations trend.

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initialy

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initially

had

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a higher percentage

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percentages

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of ages,

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it outraced females

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of the period.

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regular physical activity at the

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15

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to 24 was about 52.8%, being higher than

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rate by approximately 5%.

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, it decreased to almost 10.6% at the

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25 to 34 and continue to decrease to 39.5% at the youth 35 to 44.

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percentage

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steadily until the end of

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age

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, reaching around 43.1% at the maturity

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of 45

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to 54, 45.1% at the maturity

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to 64, and hitting a higher point up about 46.7% in old

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65 and over. Females

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in the youth 15 to 24 was 47.7%, having a fewer

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than the

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, the

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increased steadily at the

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age

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25 to 34 and 35 to 44, it was 48.9% to 52.5%. After that, the figure experienced

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steady growth during the next

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45 to 64, and decreased to 47.1%, in the

end

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females

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outracing the male

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