The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph indicates the average Carbon dioxide
emissions
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per person from 4 different countries in Europe: the United
Kingdom
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, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal from 1967 to 2007. Overview, It can be seen that Sweden has shown a massive change in the average CO2
emissions
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throughout the years as its
trend
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has fluctuated the most but the United
Kingdom
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has the highest average CO2 emission. Starting from Portugal, in 1967, had the lowest metric tonnes in CO2
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with around 1.5mts. From 1967 to 1987, the
trend
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moved up in a linear line showing an increase in
emissions
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, going from 2
mts
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. to almost 4
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mts
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.
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, the
trend
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stayed steady from 1997 to 2007.
This
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trend
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also
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applied to Italy’s CO2
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as well as
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its
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also
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slightly increasing from 4mts in 1967 to approximately 6.2mts in 1977 and remaining steady during the same period as Portugal. Another interesting point from
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graph is the
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from Sweden. It had a peak in its
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, unlike the
trend
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of the other three countries that showed a gentle line of
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. Starting from around 8.3mts in 1967 to around 10.2mts in 1977. After that, the average CO2 emission plummeted to 7mts. in 1987 and that’s when its
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started to show a slow decline in the average. In 2007, it reached the same average of CO2
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as Portugal. Both of them had the lowest average of CO2
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in 2007.
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the United
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showed a movement of a slope gradually decreasing over the years. A decline in its
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did not change much of its average as it only went from around 10.4mts in 1967 to only around 9mts. In 2007 where its peak hit. The average CO2 emission of the United
Kingdom
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was still the highest among the other three countries, even though it showed a slight change in its
trend
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, kingdom, co, trend, mts with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 12 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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