The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the portion of men who use cigarettes in seven different urban areas
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the middle numbers of the whole planet in 2000 and 2015. Units are measured in percentages.
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, it can be seen that in some countries there was an increase in smoking habits and in others there was a decrease. Only one remained approximately the same and most of them were around the average for the world.
Egypt and Lebanon were two states that showed a dramatic rise in data in 2015 ( going up from just over 30% to around 45-50%). Their results were very similar to those of the whole planet.
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Armenia (dropping from around 70% to 50%), and Bangladesh (from 60% to under 40%). They were Correct subject-verb agreement
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the ones with the highest rate of men smokers in 2000. Mexico and Australia showed a fall as well ( Both went from around 30% to around 20%).Linking Words
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