In many countries, women join the army as men do. However, some people argue that the army solely needs males. What is your opinion?

Our governments are doing many efforts and passing rules for

women

's authority and goods. In the plethora of nations, females part of the military

army

as males do, I'm agree with the first notion

as well as

this

essay will discuss both views in the paragraph . Let's begin with,

firstly

, The authorities gives many opportunities for

women

's rights

Although

,

Girls

participate in numerous field and are successful,

Moreover

, females are joining the

army

line,

with

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very good spirit and performed in their stream as men,

However

, some people are supporting

this

thing and motivate for their girl child. The second thing is,

girls

always good efforts when they are in school

such

as studying and playing sports since childhood , But some individuals did not appreciate their

girls

and always discourage

from

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these things. But others did not think it

this

,

Consequently

, the Indian queen of Jhansi was a dedicated, fearless gentlewoman of their century who led their

team

or was successful in wars.

Additionally

, every Indian

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of their dare. So, every lady does best in their stream physically and mentally like gents. On the other flip side, In some religions did not encourage their

girls

for the military

army

because they think it

this

worked only for men's the reason is they are strong than

women

such

as body fitness and emotionally gents powerful in every physical activity.

While

, society or men people did not like opposite sex that heavy

on

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there and compare with their

that is

one reason why many married females spoiled their career and before marriage parents did not support their daughters, because they think that no one did not get

marriage

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with their daughter's

For instance

, recently I saw the news about the Turkey war one side boy lead their

team

and second hand a girl lead the

team

so any reason for Turkey to lose the war because they had to say the girl lead the

team

. That's why they lose it.

Nevertheless

, in some ,nations high authorities did not give opportunities for a noblewoman kind of navy and airforce.

To conclude

,

women

are doing very well and very successful in their work

such

as in the military

army

and other many streams

Although

, Government gives plentiful authority for

girls

' rights

while

society did not courage ladies

However

they always feel down on male people. So they should change their opinion on woman's rights.