The pie charts represent 6 different regions that utilized water for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.
These pie charts depict 6 regions that utilized water. It is clear from the graphs Central
Asia
has the highest percentage of agricultural use
.
According to
what is shown the lowest percentage of domestic use
was in both Central Asia
and South East Asia
with equal rates. Moreover
, domestic use
has the lowest percentage in all regions and the highest one was 19% in South Africa.
Next,
if we noticed the industrial use
in both Europe and North America it has 48 and 53 per cent and that means half of the pie. However
, agricultural use
in four regions has a rate between 71% and 88% and that is
more than half.
To sum up
, we could say that agricultural use
was the highest in Africa, Central Asia
, South East Asia
and South America, but the lowest was in Europe and North America with 32% and 39%.Submitted by qazwsxcvbnm1452 on
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