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The graph below shows the regional household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from the years 2005-2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the regional household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from the years 2005-2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
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 line chart detects the
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 of international
students
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 enrolment in the Desalle U University Site between 1980 and 2020. It is clear from the graph that Iran
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 have the highest
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 in 2009.
According to
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 what is shown Greek decreased in 2005 from 180 people to less than 160 in 2006, but there was
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 decline in 2007 to
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less than 80
student
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, and there was a fall
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 the next years to
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less than 30
person
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 in 2009.
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, Turkey
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 have a shiny grew from 2005 to 2007 with numbers from 20 to about 90 but after that started to be stable.
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, Iran
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 have
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varied growth with a stable
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 between 2006 and 2008, but there was a high
grew
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 in 2009 to be the highest
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 of
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students
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 in
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 period with 160
person
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To sum up
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, we could say that the
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 of Greek
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 decline all over, but Iran and Turkey
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 had grown in all the years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • regional household recycling rates
  • overall trend
  • significant increase
  • steady rise
  • fluctuations
  • marginal decline
  • notable drop
  • peak
  • trough
  • comparative analysis
  • year-on-year growth
  • data patterns
  • rate of change
  • noteworthy milestones
  • disparities
  • environmental policies
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