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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the whole amount of
time
 of callings in the UK,
splitted
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split
show examples
 into 3 categories, in
period
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the period
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 between 1995 and 2002. In an overview, even though mobiles and national and international - fixed
line
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lines
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 had increased over the years, local fixed
line
 got
decreases
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decreased
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 starting from 2000 to 2002. In 1999, the highest count of mobile calls by local type, accounted for 90
billion
minutes
, at the same
time
,
quantity
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the quantity
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 of national and international fixed
line
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lines
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 and all ringings extended to
the
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apply
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50 and nearly 13
billion
minutes
. The lowest number of dials by mobiles(all calls) having approximately 4
billion
minutes
 in 1995,
while
 the towering amount
were
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was
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 in 2002
by
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with
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 45
billion
 calling
minutes
.
However
, national and international fixed
line
 statistic shows that it increased all the
time
 from 1995 to 2002. It boosted from 38 to 61
billion
minutes
. The local fixed
line
 is the
leader
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leading
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 category
about
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for
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 telephone calls in the UK, at the same
time
, mobiles(all calls) always showed
a
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the
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 lowest results.
mation
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motion
 by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make
Wrong verb form
making
show examples
 comparisons where relevant.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, line, billion, minutes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number of minutes
  • telephone calls
  • categories
  • local – fixed line
  • national and international – fixed line
  • mobiles
  • general trend
  • yearly totals
  • significant changes
  • milestones
  • data
  • rise significantly
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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