The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the whole amount of
time
of callings in the UK,
splitted
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split
show examples
into 3 categories, in
period
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the period
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between 1995 and 2002. In an overview, even though mobiles and national and international - fixed
line
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lines
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had increased over the years, local fixed
line
got
decreases
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decreased
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starting from 2000 to 2002. In 1999, the highest count of mobile calls by local type, accounted for 90
billion
minutes
, at the same
time
,
quantity
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the quantity
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of national and international fixed
line
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lines
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and all ringings extended to
the
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apply
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50 and nearly 13
billion
minutes
. The lowest number of dials by mobiles(all calls) having approximately 4
billion
minutes
in 1995,
while
the towering amount
were
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was
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in 2002
by
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with
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45
billion
calling
minutes
.
However
, national and international fixed
line
statistic shows that it increased all the
time
from 1995 to 2002. It boosted from 38 to 61
billion
minutes
. The local fixed
line
is the
leader
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leading
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category
about
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for
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telephone calls in the UK, at the same
time
, mobiles(all calls) always showed
a
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the
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lowest results.
mation
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motion
by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make
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making
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comparisons where relevant.
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  • total number of minutes
  • telephone calls
  • categories
  • local – fixed line
  • national and international – fixed line
  • mobiles
  • general trend
  • yearly totals
  • significant changes
  • milestones
  • data
  • rise significantly
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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