Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, there are already limited sources of
energy
in the world. It said to be that humans have consumed and wasted all of it. Some people say that government
should act on it on behalf of us. In my opinion, government
is very
crucial part of sourcing alternative Correct article usage
a very
energy
.
The main reason why the government
should look for alternative sources of energy
is because
it is starting to get scarce. Replace the word
that
Government
could advertise different ways of saving Add an article
The government
energy
to
each and every household. Change preposition
for
For example
, thru advertisements, people would be able to know how they could use different ways to have and save energy
. Also
, finding other source
of Change the wording
another source
other sources
energy
could limit the
pollution. It is known that the current way of having Correct article usage
apply
energy
is very detrimental to the environment. For instance
, locating oil in the sea could lead to oil
spill or fire that has Add an article
an oil
dangerous
effect Add an article
a dangerous
the dangerous
to
our ozone layer.
Change preposition
on
To conclude
, instigating other plans for sourcing energy
is very beneficial not just for us humans but also
for the environment. It is the government
's responsibility to their constituents to locate other ways of having energy
like thru windmills or by water current. As long as we the citizens are helping and supporting our government
energy
sourcing would be easy and helpful.Submitted by eric.benedict520 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
